Personal Statement Writing Service

Student: Ming, Singapore

🎓 Result: Offer from Oxford, Chemistry

When I first started thinking about applying to Oxford, I honestly didn’t think I stood a chance. I had no idea how to approach the personal statement, or what the process would be like. What really helped me was having someone walk me through the process step-by-step and really push me to think deeply about why I wanted to study science.

When I got the offer email, my first thought was, I couldn’t have done this alone. First Class’s programme didn’t just improve my application, it transformed the way I think.

Student: Makoto, Japan

🎓 Result: Offer from Oxford, Mathematics

My mentor was instrumental in helping me craft a compelling personal statement for Maths at Oxford. Her support was both effective and holistic. The process would have been far more difficult without her guidance.

She had three key strengths that stood out during our time working together. First, she had a clear understanding of what makes a personal statement stand out. She asked thought-provoking questions based on the prompt, which helped me express my skills, experiences, and passion for mathematics with clarity and confidence.

Second, her feedback was always clear and actionable. Her suggestions were concise, well-explained, and easy to implement. She was also highly responsive and open to follow-up questions, which made the process feel collaborative rather than stressful.

Finally, I really appreciated her honesty. She didn’t hesitate to point out weaknesses in my drafts, and her constructive yet tactful feedback played a huge role in helping me refine my statement into something I was truly proud of.

Student: Wayne, Singapore

🎓 Result: Offer from Imperial College London, Chemistry

I’ve always wanted to study Chemistry, but the process is so competitive for top UK universities, and I wasn’t sure how to write a personal statement that would stand out. Working with my mentor changed everything. He helped me shape my experiences into a story that I was proud of.

What made the difference was my mentor’s patience. He never rushed me or made me feel bad. Instead he helped me to understand what admissions officers look for and highlight my strengths.